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Don’t.
Don’t look at me like that
Why must you cry like that?
I can’t watch you this way
We have no choice but to breathe
Give into the seduction
Of bottled sanity

Don’t touch me like that
Why must I die like that?
I can’t live on this way
I wish we had a choice
A button to press
Before she gave birth
So I could cancel this existence
Like a check I would bounce

Don’t hold me like that
Why must I live like that?
I can’t hide like this
I want to crawl into my hole
Tears flood and drown me
Just let me fall
To hells infernal majesty

Don’t hurt me like that
Why must I bleed like that?
I can’t lie like this
Pity me not, cry for me so!
This life sucks, I know!


I want a new one…
All sales final,
No returns
Damaged, broken
Unmended, untended
Don’t leave me alone!

Hide me neatly away
To be your special pet
Just don’t…
Don’t break me like that
©2008-2009 ~Night-Hawk77
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Author's Comments

...I don't like all of this but...opinions please anyway?

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I like this, I think the last stanza should somehow match the rest a little better though. Other than that, nice!

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:love:

-Ophelia

"The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waist's and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save Us!"

And I'll look down and whisper "No."

-Rorschach from "Watchmen"
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I really like the last stanza, so although (as the previous comment states) it may not necessarily match the rest of the poem, it more than makes up for it in quality :)

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